The revision of my music video analysis, "Dear Future Husband" by Meghan Trainor really emphasizes the revision process. Once I begin to make my changes I will have applied the procedural and declarative knowledge to my paper. This meets the requirements of of the learning outcome of revision and writing as a process because I really focusing on making my paper a more well rounded piece of work. The point of revising a paper is to learn from your mistakes and to fix them. Once the mistakes are edited my paper will flow better and will be a better paper in general. Fixing my mistakes will help my apply what I have learned in Composition 105 and learn how to write in a different way.
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